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xealmox
Langrean Legacy Part 1
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Persons:Captain Lushua Gra'shan,Comm Officer Drerek Mogami and Tactical Officer Mark Rhoadess
Location:Morrigas Fla'Quas Naval Shipyards,just jumped out of hyperspace.
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a Shockwave went through the ship as it exited hyperspace.

''I knew it,the HS engine was going to blow.
That frigate had shot us up pretty good.
get the repair crews on the line and inform Fleet Command of the situation and also send a
Level 5 Data burst directly to Hiigara with all of our sensor data and logs.''

''Sir the Shipyard is asking what the hell where doing here right in the open space,what shall i send back?''

''Send them this:What does it look like, where sitting here cos of a hyperspace engine failure and our reactors are failing so send some medics and tugs over immediately.''
I said to my C.O Drerek Mogami

Mark you've got the bridge.''
and left for my quarters to start making sense out of all this what has happened

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Several hours later after all repairs have been finished
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C.O:''sir,its Fleet Command on the line and they're asking for a secure connection,
Me:send the message over to my console and get out of here.
My C.O left

THAT COUNTS FOR ALL OF YOU LAZY BASTARDS TOO!!!!

i opened my personal comm network on my station and saluted to some unknown General i vaguely remembered from training courses to become a Captain of a ship this size.

I saluted the general and asked why i had to open a secure channel to Fleet Command.
the general spoke and said: you might not know it butt your ship wasn't the only ship to be attacked today.

Butt in your case its special cos you got a clear sensor reading of the enemy,the Vagr, and so we have decided to give you our orders directly,Captain Lushua Gra'shan.

you are to proceed to the Beligna sector and rendez-vous with 3th Support Fleet. from there you will proceed to the Komok sector and begin deployment of the fleet in the way im sending you right now

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Edited by xealmox on 05-07-2008 16:59
 
aspasticninja
Well, the story seems okay, but you really have to work on your formatting. Quotation marks, proper capitalization, sentence flow. I suggest writing in Word, or some other program w/ a spelling/grammar check and then copy/pasting it into the post box. That's what I did for Deep Run. As it is, it's kinda hard to follow.
Ford, I don't mean to alarm you, but there are an infinite number of monkey's outside and they want us to go over their screenplay for Hamlet.
 
xealmox
okay thank you i had done it right here in the message box so thanks and nice story you got there BTW
Edited by xealmox on 05-07-2008 09:19
 
Komo val
Also drop the ''boom'' part, it just sounds wrong. Also it's hard to evaluate the story just from this, so I'll await more chapters for C&C.
 
xealmox
Langrean Legacy part 2

=======================================================================
Persons:Captain Lushua Gra'shan,Comm Officer Drerek Mogami and Tactical Officer Mark Rhoadess
and Executive Officer Dylan Makran
Location:Morrigas Fla'Quas Naval Shipyards,just jumping into hyperspace
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CO: Sir,we've got a green light for Hyperspace entry
MeShockkay roll in our bays and inform Fleet Command of our HS exit point
CO,XO and TO:yes sir
Me:thanks for your help,Morrigas Shipyards and godspeed you all make it
Co:go silent and lock all bulkheads in place
SHIP WIDE:this is the CO all personnel prepare for HS jump and bulkhead closure
MePfftilot plot a course for these exact coordinates and erase the exit point from the ships computers
Pilot:we are gaining speed sir...........close to HS entry speed.......and jumped

My XO(executive officer) came up through the lift and saluted me

Me at ease,Makran,you have the bridge
XO:Yes sir
several hours into the HS jump
* just awakening from an alarm *

CO(through com system:sir we've detected a High Energy emission coming from a nearby nebula and its on our path,shall we exit Hyperspace ?

I started to think and came up with a plan
no head around the emission and if it moves to intercept,exit hyperspace and shoot it out of the sky
whatever it might be
TO:the target is moving to intercept and a small group of what appears to be a fighter group and a small escort carrier have broken off from the main emission source

Me:load all Point Defense Guns and bring the Langrean Array online(will explain later)
TO:yes sir,PDS teams are standing by and the LA is online and ready to be charged
Me:Exit Hyperspace NOW
quantum wavefront has dissipated sir,one of the pilots said
Me:good bring us broadside to the enemy ships and let it appear we are having engine failure,so send us in a spinning or Quebec class maneuver

CO:sir were getting a LVL 5 Encrypted Message from Hiigara,what shall we do
Me:FRAK,just read it aloud I don't care that my crew will hear it ill probably be placed in a court marshal anyway
CO:When arriving at the Tokugawa Nebulae hail the ships there with a P-5 class encoded signal,P-5 thats not been used for ages now,why the hell would they want us to send such a signal anyway cos its mainly used on pirate vessels cos of its low tracking rate.
TO:sir the ships are powering their weapons and heading for midships
Me:Start the encoded signal transmission and include our assignment code
CO:Hailing with P-5 class encoded signal started
TO:enemy ships have broken off attack and are heading back towards the emission
CO:where getting a P-5 encoded transmission from those ships
Me;send it to my desk in the ready room
CO:yes sir

minutes later

Hello Captain of the Prototype (Blackened out) class Fortitude

This is Fleet General Fych Paktu and your welcomed to follow us into the nebulae to receive your instructions for the mission your going to undertake

please leave all but essential staff on the Personnel Carrier we've sent to you and move into the nebulae

then confine your Bridge staff to their quarters and meet me at airlock 17B with a security team present

End of Message

Received date:N/A
Receiving ship:N/A
Sending Source:Source Unknown

Me:what the hell,there's no date,receiving ship or even a source of the transmission

I left for the Bridge
when I walked in I noticed that my staff non essential staff already was leaving for their Personnel Carrier

Me:all of you listen carefully,we are about to enter this nebulae for updated mission files and a repair job on the Langrea System so I need all of you to stay quiet and only speak when spoken to

All remaining staff on the bridge saluted me and the CO sent a ship wide announcement through the ship

''Take us in'' I said to no-one in particular and the pilot fired up the engines

Me:Mark get your Ship defence team suited up in Honour Guard Suits and meet me at airlock 17B to escort a General to the Core Room and lock us in

TO:Yes sir
 
xealmox
NOTES

Morrigas Fleet shipyards is a major Borderline Shipyard complex composed of a Big shipyard in the middle of a gravitational field projected there by a solid barrier of asteroids(the Shipyards so big it acctualy pulls the asteroids in towards itself if not for its Defenses ripping any asteroid coming to close to shreds or moving it with a Salvage Corvette

the ship my story centers around is a reverse engineered version of a Progenitor Weapon system found on a ship in the Langrean points(points where a object is safe from gravetic pull) of the Tasdonis Maquel system(Since they where unable to activate the ancient ship before it got destroyed enroute to a Hiigaran Research Station

Its a borderline patrol vessel hence that its HS engine failed when arriving at the morrigas fleet shipyards because it had fought a group of Vagr trying out the defences of the Hiigaran border and badly damaged its HS system among its other badly damaged systems
Edited by xealmox on 05-07-2008 16:56
 
CIWS2000
i think you meant to say Lagrangian points
 
xealmox
yes i think so too LOL didn't see that one coss my notepad just auto corrected it to Langrean points without me noticing
 
CIWS2000
sometimes even spell check is useless
especially when it auto corrects stuff you type and is insistent on using the wrong word
 
xealmox
yes indeed well finally am back home so can probably after i reformat my pc putt up some screens to guide the story and also show my story's prototype carrier/Ion cannon-ish weapons platform(its also a carrier cos it has 3 retractable hanger bays to transport smaller fighters(needs to retract to hyperspace and takes about 20 secs to retract/extend)

their retractable cos their actually buried in the ships hull as not to distort the quantum wavefront wich forms when entering,during,and after exiting
Edited by xealmox on 06-07-2008 04:54
 
xealmox
PILOT:entering nubulae sir,we're detecting multiple Megalith sized objects at the center of the disstortions and a fleet of smaller ships around it
Me:activate the Radiation shields and get decontamination crews and stations on standby
XO:yes sir,moving through the eye now
CO:the admiral has reported in and is sending a small ambassador class vessel towards us
MeShockkay,Makran you have the bridge'

and me and the Tactical Officer both went our seperate ways me towards the Airlock,he towards his team awaiting him a deck above us

Sir docking of Ambassador class vessel confirmed,awaiting your orders
Me(through shipwide com ) ALL personell report to your quarters immediatly and lock yourself in, i repeat ALL personell report to your quarters immedatly and lock yourself in

IF any of the remaining crew sees you wandering abiut the ship they have permission to kill

*airlock doors slowly open and the corvettes door slides open*
*i salute the general and start to walk towards the elevator when i get grabbed in my neck and almost thrown against a bulkhead*
What the FRAK was that for, you moron

Guard of the general:Sorry sir it looked like you were carrying a gun with you so i had to be sure
Guard locks himself out from the core room and locks us in

General:Sorry for the trouble you've gone through butt this information is highly classified and not even Karan knows of its existence yet so we had to take all precautions so that no one else hears this


Just a small update this time as im upgrading my pc to a higher level wich requires a complete overhaul of the whole network at home too and so it might take a little bit long before i post here again
 
Komo val
Still haven't had time to read it, however there's one thing that really stands out (and in a bad way): The dialogs.

Unless you're making a play you should drop the:
Me:bla,bla
Him:bla,bla
...

For example the last dialog:

''Entering nubulae sir,we're detecting multiple Megalith sized objects at the center of the disstortions and a fleet of smaller ships around it'' the pilot reported while staring at the sensor readings.
''Activate the Radiation shields and get decontamination crews and stations on standby'' I quickly replied. Radiation is a real hazard out here.
The XO quickly replied ''Yes sir,moving through the eye now'' and went on ordering the various decontamination crews on standby with amazing velocity.
Valar, the CO, broke the brief silence ''the admiral has reported in and is sending a small ambassador class vessel towards us''
''Okay,Makran you have the bridge'' I said while taking a last look at the tactical map. I don't know why I do that, actually, but who cares, I got more important things to do right now.
I exited the bridge virtually at the same time as the Tactical officer, however we soon headed our separate ways...
 
xealmox
Got it all in the way you suggested and i find it looks better now too

Langrean Legacy Part 1
=======================================================================
Persons: Captain Lushua Gra'shan,Comm Officer Drerek Mogami and Tactical Officer Mark Rhoadess
Location:Morrigas Fla'Quas Naval Shipyards, just jumped out of hyperspace.
=======================================================================
a Shockwave went through the ship as it exited hyperspace.

''I knew it, the HS engine was going to blow.
That frigate had shot us up pretty good.
get the repair crews on the line and inform Fleet Command of the situation and also send a
Level 5 Data burst directly to Hiigara with all of our sensor data and logs.''

''Sir the Shipyard is asking what the hell where doing here right in the open space, what shall i send back?''

''Send them this: What does it look like, where sitting here cos of a hyperspace engine failure and our reactors are failing so send some medics and tugs over immediately.''
I said to my C.O Drerek Mogami

Mark you've got the bridge.''
and left for my quarters to start making sense out of all this what has happened

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Several hours later after all repairs have been finished
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''sir, its Fleet Command on the line and they're asking for a secure connection,

send the message over to my console and get out of here.
??My C.O left??

THAT COUNTS FOR ALL OF YOU LAZY BASTARDS TOO!!!!

i opened my personal comm network on my station and saluted to some unknown General i vaguely remembered from training courses to become a Captain of a ship this size.
I saluted the general and asked why i had to open a secure channel to Fleet Command.
the general spoke and said: you might not know it butt your ship wasn't the only ship to be attacked today.

Butt in your case its special cos you got a clear sensor reading of the enemy, the Vagr, and so we have decided to give you our orders directly, Captain Lushua Gra'shan.

you are to proceed to the Beligna sector and rendezvous with 3rd Support Fleet. from there you will proceed to the Komok sector and begin deployment of the fleet in the way im sending you right now

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Langrean Legacy part 2

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Persons: Captain Lushua Gra'shan,Comm Officer Drerek Mogami and Tactical Officer Mark Rhoadess
and Executive Officer Dylan Makran
Location:Morrigas Fla'Quas Naval Shipyards, just jumping into hyperspace
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CO: Sir, we?ve got a green light for Hyperspace entry

*the doors all close around the ship, you can hear the HS module charge up and an alarm informs us of a charged HS module*

okay roll in our bays and inform Fleet Command of our HS exit point

yes sir

* the ships HS window starts to appear and quickly expands to its window shaped form*

thanks for your help,Morrigas Shipyards and godspeed you all make it
go silent and lock all bulkheads in place

this is the CO all personnel prepare for HS jump and bulkhead closure
plot a course for these exact coordinates and erase the exit point from the ships computers

?we are gaining speed sir...........close to HS entry speed.......and jumped?

My XO(executive officer) came up through the lift and saluted me

at ease Makran,you have the bridge from now on
Yes sir
several hours into the HS jump

* just awakening from an alarm *

CO through com system: sir we've detected a High Energy emission coming from a nearby nebula and its on our path, shall we exit Hyperspace ?

I started to think and came up with a plan
no head around the emission and if it moves to intercept, exit hyperspace and shoot it out of the sky
whatever it might be

the target is moving to intercept and a small group of what appears to be a fighter group and a small escort carrier have broken off from the main emission source

load all Point Defence Guns and bring the Langrean Array online(will explain later)

yes sir,PDS teams are standing by and the LA is online and ready to be charged

Exit Hyperspace NOW

Quantum Wavefront has dissipated sir, one of the pilots said

Good bring us broadside to the enemy ships and let it appear we are having engine failure, so send us in a spinning or Quebec class manoeuvre

sir were getting a LVL 5 Encrypted Message from Hiigara, what shall we do

FRAK, just read it aloud I don't care that my crew will hear it ill probably be placed in a court marshal anyway

When arriving at the Tokugawa Nebulae hail the ships there with a P-5 class encoded signal,P-5 that?s not been used for ages now, why the hell would they want us to send such a signal anyway cos its mainly used on pirate vessels cos of its low tracking rate

sir the ships are powering their weapons and heading for midships

Start the encoded signal transmission and include our assignment code

Hailing with P-5 class encoded signal started
enemy ships have broken off attack and are heading back towards the emission
we?re getting a P-5 encoded transmission from those ships

send it to my desk in the ready room

yes sir

*minutes later*

Hello Captain of the Prototype (Blackened out) class Fortitude

This is Fleet General Fych Paktu and your welcomed to follow us into the nebulae to receive your instructions for the mission your going to undertake

please leave all but essential staff on the Personnel Carrier we've sent to you and move into the nebulae

then confine your Bridge staff to their quarters and meet me at airlock 17B with a security team present

End of Message

Received date:N/A
Receiving ship:N/A
Sending Source: Source Unknown

what the hell, there?s no date, receiving ship or even a source of the transmission
I left for the Bridge
when I walked in I noticed that my staff non essential staff already was leaving for their Personnel Carrier

all of you listen carefully, we are about to enter this nebulae for updated mission files and a repair job on the Langrean System so I need all of you to stay quiet and only speak when spoken to

All remaining staff on the bridge saluted me and the CO sent a ship wide announcement through the ship

''Take us in'' I said to no-one in particular and the pilot fired up the engines

Mark get your Ship defence team suited up in Honour Guard Suits and meet me at airlock 17B to escort a General to the Core Room and lock us in

Yes sir



entering nebulae sir, we?re detecting multiple Megalith sized objects at the center of the disstortions and a fleet of smaller ships around it

activate the Radiation shields and get decontamination crews and stations on standby

yes sir, moving through the eye now

the admiral has reported in and is sending a small ambassador class vessel towards us

okay, Makran you have the bridge

and me and the Tactical Officer both went our separate ways me towards the Airlock, he towards his team awaiting him a deck above us

Sir docking of Ambassador class vessel confirmed, awaiting your orders

(through ship wide com ) ALL personell report to your quarters immediately and lock yourself in, i repeat ALL personell report to your quarters immediately and lock yourself in

IF any of the remaining crew sees you wandering about the ship they have permission to kill

*airlock doors slowly open and the corvettes door slides open*
*I salute the general and start to walk towards the elevator when i get grabbed in my neck and almost thrown against a bulkhead*

What the FRAK was that for, you moron

Sorry sir it looked like you were carrying a gun with you so i had to be sure for the generals live is more worth than anybody on this ship including myself because if he weren?t here Hiigara would probably already have fallen to the Vagr forces

*Guard locks himself out from the core room and locks us in(the general and me)*

Sorry for the trouble you've gone through but this information is highly classified and not even Karan knows of its existence yet so we had to take all precautions so that no one else hears this

NOTES

Morrigas Fleet shipyards is a major Borderline Shipyard complex composed of a Big shipyard in the middle of a gravitational field projected there by a solid barrier of asteroids(the Shipyards so big it actually pulls the asteroids in towards itself if not for its Defences ripping any asteroid coming to close to shreds or moving it with a Salvage Corvette

the ship my story centers around is a reverse engineered version of a Progenitor Weapon system found on a ship in the Lagrangian points(points where a object is safe from gravetic pull) of the Tasdonis Maquel system(Since they where unable to activate the ancient ship before it got destroyed enroute to a Hiigaran Research Station

Its a borderline patrol vessel hence that its HS engine failed when arriving at the Morrigas fleet shipyards because it had fought a group of Vagr trying out the defences of the Hiigaran border and badly damaged its HS system among its other badly damaged systems
Edited by xealmox on 07-07-2008 18:28
 
xealmox
Langrean Legacy part 4

Persons: Captain Lushua Gra'shan, Fleet General Fych Paktu and various Captains from other ships
Location: Briefing Room, aboard the ******** class Super carrier Necromancer, inside the Nebulae Cluster

Thanks for you all gathering here and I hope this little rebellion can be crushed in time so Hiigara can be spared another Makaan spawning from their conquested space
As you might know, or not, we are inside the Flycatcher Nebulae Cluster near the Vagr-Hiigaran Border to break through their defences in concert with 2TH,3TH and 5 TH EFRAF (Emergency Fast Response Attack Fleet) at these points

*a 3d projection activates and displays 13 points out of witch 4 are the points they will take on*

But sir, cant we just jump right past the border here

Well see that?s the next problem, and that?s this, its self replicating , so whenever we try to kill it, it replicates itself before its other hull gets destroyed, and it also emits a field witch blocks all HS movement

*the 3d screen shows a massive (possibly progenitor) warship*

And all of the other regions are so heavily populated we risk them knowing we are coming
Any of you got some other ideas then speak up now
Okay then that?s settled

This is the order of group commanders
*Captain Lushua Gra'shan will spearhead the assault at point 6 and 7
*I will take my group and take points 8,5,1 and 13
*Captain Hirsh Malory will take points 2,3,4 and 5
*and the remaining points are assigned to Captain Loch Gra?shan

You?ve been handed out group placement and vessel information
I would like to point out to stay out of the Langrean Arrays 2 KM blast radius when firing
We will depart for our separate coordinates in 2 days so every group has chance to get refuelled and rearmed
And that concludes this meeting

If you all will excuse us I need to speak the group leaders in private

*data missing*moving on to next file in order*

Location: bridge of Fortitude, point 6

Sir we?ve got incoming fighters on all vectors
And frigates headed our way

Tell the fleet to launch fighters, activate weapons and stay away from us for the first 30 minutes of the battle
Group confirms and is moving to battle
Charge the LA array and fire at the nearest enemy cluster with a Helix shot
LA array charging, fighters are trying to breach outer defensive perimeter
Tell the ships to move closer together and open up a new frequency for the PDS teams to chat on for optimal coverage

Sir, we can?t otherwise we will get burned by your shots
Okay, move towards the enemy at ramming speeds, charge the LA again for a full power shot this time and power our HS module to jump to point 7

*HS Module charging*

Sir we?ve got a breach at the back of our lines
Flak frigates are taking care of it
Jump away but first fire the array at that carrier
Yes sir, firing LA array
Carriers engines have been destroyed and its got major structural damage to its main hull and fighter bays
*HS window opening*


Location: bridge of Fortitude, point 7

Sir the Malacant has hailed with a permission to leave the battlefield for emergency repairs
Permission denied ,tell them to clamp their ship to our engine array and then disable our engines, then send a repair team to their ship and repair their damaged systems

TORPEDO WAVE INCOMING
Brace for impact, I said as our main weapons(so its only the cannons and most of the PDS systems) and our hanger bays got ripped to shreds

DEPLOY THE LA array in MIRROR mode then fire and tell the Malacant to activate their engines at full speed
But sir that will kill us
No it won?t trust me
Firing LA array
Were speeding up

WARNING
*increased energy build-up in the LA array core *
Open dispersion valves 1 through 71 and get us the hell outta here
*energy flying out of the dispersion valves*

Moving around towards the fleet, sir
Activate the Collection Panels
The energy witch was released from the valves has hit the main enemy carrier group and has caused a power failure in their systems
All systems are getting Enormous amounts of energy, the power core can?t handle all this energy sir
Fire the LA array continuously towards any target in reach
yes sir
almost 90 % of their fleet has been destoyed
Power is dropping towards normal levels
Tell the Malacant to move us to the back of the fleet and then disconnect from orur hull and get back to the fight
And start repairs on our damaged systems

The group at point 6 has reported that they have broken through and are securing the site for additional reinforcements
Were getting chatter from all over that the points have been secured
Tell the Malacant to fire its full missile spread to X368.63 Y464.68 Z68.74 and tell the carriers to call in fighters and jump right into the middle of the surviving Vagr ships

YES sir
Carriers have called in fighters and hypering out now, the Malacants missiles are being intercepted
Turn the missiles towards the enemy fighters and fire another spread at the Vagr ships
All ships move in for the kill, and activate the HS inhibitor field
Carriers have hypered in and have launched fighters

Last of the Vagr forces in point 7 are destroyed. cleaning up for reinforcements
Edited by xealmox on 08-07-2008 18:29
 
xealmox
Langrean Legacy part 5
*from this bit on ill have a go from the Super Carriers perspective before switching back to the Fortitude
This is Fleet Command

Prepare for Hyperspacial insertion of Automated Turrets and Constructor class vessels for construction of permanent defensive emplacements

Get all groups to form up with the Necromancer at point 12 and prepare for Hyperspace Burst Jumping

*a form a Experimental Hyperspace Jumping witch tightly compresses all the hyperspacing ships so much they are only one molecule thick(takes so much energy that the hyperspace providing ships need at least be 3 Battlecruiser class ships for a fleet off 12 Frigates(the entire fleet has more than 50 BC's in there so thats 600 frigates and uncounted smaller vessels)(Carriers and other ships larger than a frigate can Burst Jump by themselves so I won't mention them)and then decompressing to normal size*

Necromancer reports that Hiigaran forces have been alerted and are headed this way to support us

''this is the Necromancer,all ships turn on Hyperspace fields and Burst Jump towards the Qwel Moshre
Command Station''

Burst Jump successful,we've arrived in the Qwel Moshre Sensor Net without alerting the Vagr forces in the area

''all ships,our first priority is to disable all communication means in the area so the Vagr won't be alerted of our presence here,after the first objective is completed all ships will move towards the Qwel Moshre Command Station and try to capture it,if thats not possible we will destroy it,is that acknowledged''

all ships have acknowledged orders and are moving to their separate targets

the Scout frigates have taken position and are deploying their sensor grid

we now have complete coverage of the System,sir

Multiple casualties reported all over the system,those bastard were waiting for us

Incoming BC class hyperspacial signals from in front and behind us

SHIT,where surrounded by Vagr forces with no way of moving because of the Burst Jump which drained our reactors

Friendly signals acknowledged,the Vagr battlecruisers are outnumbered 5 to 1 sir

Multiple incoming missiles launched from the Battlecruisers,where diverting all the available power to the PDS grid,Hold that order and turn on our engines,but sir,well never have enough time to get away,
im not looking to get away,so just do it,yes sir,Now perform a barrel roll and halfway through divert all power to our sensor scramblers then quickly divert all power back to the engines and finish that barrel roll

Missiles are still headed for us,sir,performing barrel roll,switching power to the sensor scramblers,diverting back to engines and finishing of the barrel roll maneuver

*most missiles pass right under the Super carrier and some hit the carrier*

Minor damage to main sensor array and Section D25 block 6 has been destroyed,ER teams en route to repair it

Vagr battlecruiser line almost completely destroyed,additional reinforcements from our side hyperspacing in

Main Attack Group Attires has breached final defensive perimeter of the Vagr Station and is sending in Marine frigates to Capture it

Scout Frigates report the final hyperspace inhibitor line has been destroyed and that all detected Vagr forces have been destroyed,their sending out their attached scout squadrons to ''Ping'' the area and perform additional sensor sweeps

Artillery Frigate Group Marius reports that the Vagr Station has been captured and their moving in to re enforce it

*i am basing my story of regular HW 2 but with some of my own units as well*

Send a message to Hiigara:

The Doorway has opened but whats inside we don't know
Send Construction Ships immediately to begin building a permanent wall here so that no Vagr forces will ever pass through here without having to breach it first

Sir,detecting several energy spikes in the region,ITS A MEGALITH Group hyperspacing in

*after several minutes the megaliths power up*

their deploying in a wall like formation and launching unknown fighter class ships
Interceptor and Scout squadrons are intercepting the unknown ships

Squadrons have been destroyed
The Fortitude and its Sister ship is moving towards the derelict

Another ship is hyperspacing in
it looks like the ship the Fortitude was based of

the derelicts are opening up some kind of energy conduit

Whatever their doing we must stop them,launch all available combat ships and notify the fleet where going into combat with the Fortitude and the other ships

*This is just a small bit of the last part of my story butt im going to tweak my new pc a bit so am not going to post the other part today (maybe tomorrow)
 
xealmox
Sir we're receiving a transmission from the derelict hulls and the fortitude and her sister ship

''This is the Wall of Lehuria,you have violated *$#%&^ space and we are forced to take action against this,leave now or be .......... destroyed''

''sir science teams on board of the accompanying shipyard have found the purpose of the energy conduit''

well what about it then?

Its a energy capacitor for a solid state hyperspace inhibitor field 15 light years across in every direction

sir we're receiving reports on the enemy,their ships appear to be modified movers without the clamps and in place of that some kind of energy cannon with a incredible reload time of only 3 seconds

Battle group Antares and falcon have been annihilated,and the main body of enemy ships is headed for our position
the shipyard science team reports they can replicate those modified movers with our own construction facilities and make their ships think we are friendly,for now at least

give them permission and take the bridge,Locust

Yes sir,but may I ask where you are going

im volunteering myself for the piloting of the movers,and also im taking the battle to the enemy,any objections to that,no sir,good I hope Sajuuk will save his wrath for the enemy

Skull squadron and Mauler squadron are launching from bay 2

Flight 17 has completely left the hanger bay,Mover countermeasures are now in place

''this is Flight 17 acknowledging signal broadcast,whats the sit rap on the enemy troops over''

''Flight 17 the enemy has ceased all movement and is doing nothing at the moment,the Fortitude and its sister ship however have begun powering their LA arrays and have deployed what seems to be a forcefield''

''Flight 17 acknowledges,all movers have passed through the enemy lines undetected and are headed for their respective targets''

*a Battlecruiser suddenly hyperspaces in and all hell breaks loose

receiving another transmission from the wall

''you have not listened to our orders,we will seal the wall and you will not pass anymore on your foul crusades through our territory''

''This is lieutenant Hayes to Battlecruiser Mogamir,what the hell are you thinking jumping right on top of our fleet,you've just lured the bastards this way''

''don't you worry about that,lieutenant we've set our trap with very careful planing''

*a fleet of over 50 battlecruisers and about 20 carriers jumps in in such a pattern each enemy now has at least 3 battlecruisers and 1 carrier being able to fire at it or launch fighters at it*


''your pittyfull strategy's are not working against us,we shall clear this holy place with our lances and drive you out with the strength of our fingers alone''

''The Keeper is aware. The Keeper understands. The Keeper has seen the enemy''

*46 keepers appear out of slots in the wall built to make it look like their part off the wall

''Frak,lieutenant Hayes, move your ships into point blank range with the fortitude and fire at the energy conduit points LZ-13 and MD-36 with a emp blast and after that bombard those sections with ion cannon fire,then we will take care of the keepers''

''sir we've got fire on deck 2 and a decompression in the forward mess halls also weve got incoming drones from the wall

this is Lieutenant Hayes to all decks brace for impact,we've got multiple drones headed on a ramming course with our ship

sir the outer flak wall has been breached by drones

range is 700 meters and counting
600
500
400
300

incoming hits to our sensors arrays

200
we're in firing range sir,no countermeasures detected

all ships fire at will

*the keepers stop moving

''The Keepers are not aware. The Keepers do not understand. The Keepers can't see the enemy''
''We The Keepers shall comply. We The Keepers shall bring down our enemy's. We the Keepers have seen the enemy's''

*suddenly the Keepers come to life again and start shooting each other and the wall to bits

Several days later

*Location:the Necromancer,in high orbit of a conquered planet nearby the Qwel Moshre systen
Persons:General Hayes,Fleet General Lushua Gra'shan,Fleet Cluster Overseer Hirsh Malory and Homeworld Defense Commander Fych Paktu

''the invasion is going just as planned,other than that progenitor relic activating again but that was a in calculated risk'' said Paktu as he looked at a Battlecruiser Group entering hyperspace

''Well it got us one step ahead of the Vagr at avoiding hostile progenitor vessels and even gave us a lot of derelict keepers to study,not even mentioning the technology probably inside that wall'' said General Hayes as he looked at his own Fortitude class Battlecruiser being built

''it looks like we will still have a hard time getting through looking at the battles we've already fought not even counting the countless ships lost'' he said ironically as a almost bare ship(all the armor was stripped of) was being towed in to be repaired

''I cant see us parting now that all of us got assigned to the same sector,but going to defend Hiigara is a even more difficult job than all we ever experienced,now lets go home shall we''Gra'shan then shouted an order to the nearby pilot who eagerly began preflight checks''

 
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